The sun flows beyond
the horizon and the day’s
light drips into dreams.
[Editor’s note: In rereading, several times, this haiku, I decided it needed a little tweaking. The tweaking eventually became changing the positions of two words: “flows” and “drips.” Even if you don’t agree with the change, you can see how the repositioning of two words in the poem changes the imagery in it.]
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Good decision. I like it.
Thank you. I hope Christmas and the new year have treated you well.
I like this version better.
Thank you. I do, too. I hope the re-start of school has gone smoothly.
Nope, but I am getting it straightened out, these things happen.